Glad you like that zone banner.
I also thought about exchanging the "f" with a "p", as in, fashion is my pashion [sic]. Yes, I know it's spelled passion. It's the word-play on a young, sophisticated girl's passion for fashion with the combo-word pashion. I am assuming that's your target buyer.
The concept for the lower portion of the bottom section is "fashion magazine page".
Not bad for a 55 yo grandfather...hehe

Danno
Edit: What is the Font Family for your logo, i.e. it uses the tilted "e"? It might help this possibility, but it's not too bad already.
http://practicewriter.com/vu/?5302D
Now how about this idea for the internal text:
"Indulge your passion for fashion."
or
"Surrender to your passion for fashion."

We need to talk about the "photo problems".