You mention a broken belt strap but do not show it. All "defects" should be clearly pictured so the buyer knows exactly what he's getting. Most of your pics are good (clear and close-up), but not all: some of them, when supersized, show camera movement and poor focusing/depth of field. Some the the shots could be better lit to give better detail on the front of the black subject. The owner's manual shows a lot of glare and might be better off scanned, or the lighting re-adjusted. I would locate all pics above your supplementary text (such as guarantees and bidding advice) because the pics are primary - terms, etc. should come last.
Well, I hope I don't sound too much like a nit-picky critic here. These are only my own personal opinions and are meant as POSITIVE criticizism only- please take it in this spirit. It's obvious you put a lot of work into this listing. In spite of my critique, I still think that it is a nice piece of work. All those bidders must have thought so too.
